Author original (n) | Author revised (n) | Independent writer edited (n) | ||
---|---|---|---|---|
Positive | General positive | 34 | 42 | 53 |
Headings useful | 0 | 17 | 9 | |
Terminology explained | 3 | 5 | 9 | |
Negative | Jargon/terminology | 25 | 19 | 12 |
Title not clear | 18 | 19 | 23 | |
Insufficient detail | 15 | 11 | 20 | |
Ambiguous language | 15 | 8 | 12 | |
Acronyms/abbreviations | 8 | 5 | 4 | |
Sentence length/structure | 8 | 8 | 7 | |
Grammar | 6 | 7 | 3 | |
Desirable | Headings | 13 | 5 | 1 |
Less detail | 4 | 0 | 0 | |
Conclusion | 6 | 6 | 6 |